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I thought this was a forum to explore in.

Great start! Keep it up and let your imagination run wild.

....is Rod Serling serving drinks?

Nice, but it could have gone so much further

Some fantasies should remain just that. I wouldn't want to act out or see such a fantasy take place.

Wow! There are all kinds of places you can take this. Suggest you continue.

Looks like it goes farther into the abyss each time.

Bad things can happen if they go to far.

Great story, if based on truth? What is good for the goose should be re-acted by the gander. No better place than his local sports club.