by Buffy_kgg
I know this story has been around a while...don't know if you're still reading comments. You inhabit a narrow niche where elaborate, well developed narrative and character development meet proudly dirty porn. It's a sweet spot I happen to adore. I'm impressed by a lot here but, for example, Mary and Jeannette...they're beautifully fleshed out, though they don't really get a ton of "screen time". Nice work.
Thanks - I really appreciate the kind words.
I won't be attempting fiction (or anything NSFW) again so I really am glad you liked it and took the time to give me feedback along the way. I learned a lot from your comments.
Still not a fan of golden showers, but you are top notch at story advancement via character headspace. I have been able to feel Pet's emotional rollercoaster through out the entire story. Her conflict her resonated on a visceral level. Giving us the reconnection between Pet and Sir was golden. (Snicker) The flow up scene was just plain fun.
You really, really need to write more. Much more.