All Comments on 'Remind Me'

I could tell you are a talented writer but this was too rushed.

I agree with the other comments. Please keep going

This story started out great! i just wonder why it ended so quickly.please keep writing and try to submit more next time! I want to see more of these two.

Fantastic first chapter. The buildup and development and tension were great. Please continue with more chapters. Potential to have an epic life long love story between Pam and Kyle. Ahhh everlasting life long love.

will the story be posted soon?

Wonderful start, beautiful set up and already feel the characters' relationship. Please keep it going.

Are you going to finish this?

It is a really good start, you should keep going

Betcha that elevator stunk to high heaven by the time the guy got there to rescue them. lol

Omg I love it ^.^ <3

Where's the hot sex....

...where's the story?