by silenceup2nogood
one of the most entertaining stories i have had the pleasure to read ,
everyone is having fun , nobody is doing anything they do not wish to do , it's as kinky as can be & hilarious at the same time , a truly remarkable tale .
although i do not agree with the comment asking for this series to be continued .
i think it has reached a perfect ending .
i doubt it would be possible to "up the ante" or take it to a higher level of kink or extreme and still maintain the sense of fun that these two stories have
And we need to see more... MUCH more of Bubbles!
I hope you decide to go back to this one day...
It is a classic!
I appreciate the comments from everyone, thanks.
Re: Fastandsloppy: It was difficult to convey what 60 guys doing a bukkake was like, Glad you got it.
As for Bubbles, look for her own story soon. I hadn't planned her as a major character but she's really quite the slut isn't she? I'm finishing up a sequel to the "Next Room" but once I'm done with that, I'll jump on a story for her. Maybe an afternoon at the nearby mall? What kind of sexy trouble she can get into wandering around a mall I wonder...
Another good, wet story from you; lots of action with lots of jizz. At first I didn't like the choppy way you had written the story in a bunch of small sections, but when the action got started I got the point of what you were doing. It was a clever way to describe a 60+ guy bukkake shoot. I too liked Bubbles, but for some reason I was especially pleased when you got the make-up girl involved with lubing the girlfriend's ass. Keep up the good work, I enjoy your style.
You seemed to capture the chaos of one of those shoots pretty well. All those guys trying to get their dicks sucked.
I agree with the previous comment, luv to see Bubble get her own story.
Thanks for the superb continuation of this excellent story. I hope you decide to expand it further. It has the makings of a classic.
And please, please can we have more of Bubbles? Maybe her own story?
Thanks again for the great work.