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The rest of the road trip goes as expected. Well, other than the lewd fun we have during the last day of driving. The entire day I've been driving or fucking, and I fucking loved it. Jake and Rose have gotten into an open relationship of some kind or agreed on Alexa, Giselle and I being exceptions. It's nearly evening when Giselle finally points out the mansion of the party. Wondering what the rest of our vacation will bring, I search for a place to park as I'm amazed by how huge the party really seems to be.
- COMMENTS
jsmangisabout 6 years agoThis was an ambitious first story, I thought you did quite well, considering your familiarity with English. I think you should consider using an editor if you consider writing another chapter(s) to this tale.
Tavernerabout 6 years agoFor a first time author, you did an excellent job. Plenty of hot, sexy action, and well-described as well.
Anonymousover 6 years agoStory held my attention most of the time. I
It seems as if the teller was smirking the whole time. And being very young these characters also were very experienced for 16 and 17 year old kids.
kromnulentover 6 years agoGreat story! As someone else mentioned, there are a couple of strange phrases in your English, but other than that I couldn't tell that it wasn't your first language. I think calling Giselle "an ebony" might be one of those translation things. It comes off a little strange, but didn't bother me. The RV guy might be technically correct, but there's always some suspension of disbelief in reading porn stories, so I wouldn't worry too much about that either. Can't wait to see what happens at the party! Thanks!
