All Comments on 'Rob and Elise - An Unexpected Romance'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

And this was romantic how? and it really wasn't ROB and ELISE was it? and if it continues, they're just going to be cheaters, that is NOT romantic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Chapters

If you aren't going to complete the story, at least label it as a chapter.

Ryan_HeroRyan_Heroabout 9 years agoAuthor
This is Chapter 1

My apologies. I am new to this. I stated that it was chapter 1, but it was not carried into the title.

chytownchytownalmost 9 years ago
Sexy Start****

Thanks for sharing.

tazz317tazz317almost 9 years ago
WILL THERE BE NEW RULES AND STANDARDS

for the cyber-sexers. I wonder if there is a book out already. TK U MLJ LV NV

sbrooks103sbrooks103almost 9 years ago
Good Start

Typos!

“the first few innings game Robert the thought” – GAVE Robert the thought?

“The steam was missing a player” – The TEAM?

“He grabbed his glove and slid in on his hand” – slid IT?

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