by Ryan_Hero
Typos!
“the first few innings game Robert the thought” – GAVE Robert the thought?
“The steam was missing a player” – The TEAM?
“He grabbed his glove and slid in on his hand” – slid IT?
for the cyber-sexers. I wonder if there is a book out already. TK U MLJ LV NV
My apologies. I am new to this. I stated that it was chapter 1, but it was not carried into the title.
If you aren't going to complete the story, at least label it as a chapter.
And this was romantic how? and it really wasn't ROB and ELISE was it? and if it continues, they're just going to be cheaters, that is NOT romantic.