- Romance
- Rushing In
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Click hereEach lick produced more moisture and more gyrations of her hips. When I plunged my tongue as deep as I could inside her vagina, Coco clamped her hands against my head and held me fast. I made love using my tongue as I used a finger to massage her clit. Her lower body went stiff as she thrust her hips up and held them above the surface of the bed. "Oh, god, yes," she cried.
I used my tongue on her clit to wring out another orgasm. Moving back up her body, my rejuvenated erection rested along her wet slit.
"Do I need protection?" I asked.
"The only protection will be to keep me from devouring you. Make love to me, Marc."
I lifted my hips, put my tip at her opening, and plunged inside. We both made an animal sound.
"How about if we make love later?" I asked as I bottomed out in her.
"Huh?" she said.
"Right now I want to fuck you and fuck you hard."
"Now that is something I never thought I'd hear from Saint Peter," she said. "Fuck me like the devil."
For the next ten minutes there was a wrestling match between a devil and a black angel. When finally we gave each other what we wanted and needed, I collapsed beside her. Our perspiration-soaked bodies fought for breath as we lay aside each other.
"Coco", I began to say.
"No talking now, Marc. Now you make love to me."
I think a miracle did occur, since I was hard again within ten minutes.
"This one may last longer," I said.
"How long do we have?" she asked.
I pushed inside as her vagina contracted on my erection.
"The rest of our lives?" I said.
"Then no rush, lover. No rush."
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- COMMENTS
SequoiaSempervirens2 months agoGreat story! Good character development and plot. And it ended on a great note. Also reminds me of trips to the Cape when I lived in Boston. 5*
tlevanssr6 months agoA good story. I've read it several times. There is one problem. EMILY. She was in the beginning and in surgery then nothing. Rush mentioned once about calling Emily's mother and that was the end. You need a second part. You need to finish up on the players. Does Coco and Peter get married? What happened to Emily? Does Rush write a song about her St. Peter? The ending was too short.
Anonymous9 months agoThis is a great and very well written story. 5 stars for that. Well cept for forgetting about poor incapacitated Emily.
It also falls short in the ending. It is like many other stories on lit that are well written and then stumble at the finishing post.
From the outside looking in it would appear that a talented author has been inspired by a great story idea. They set about writing it. Of course unless you write in the unapologetic style of Vandemonium1, all stories need a beginning before the middle bit is written. So it is easy to write a prologue when you know where you want the beginning bit to end up. So then the middle bit, the original core of the idea is written. And then.
And then.
Um. And then we run out of steam coz any ending aside from "And they all lived happily ever after" was just plain never planned.
I remember my old and dottery headmaster who would drill into us everyday that it is not the beginning of the task that is important. its the ending.
Of course being 15 years old I knew so much more than the silly old dottery fool. Well at least that's what I thought way way back then.
Good writing though.
Starmanpete10 months agoI think I have to agree with the comments below. The ending just didn’t quite match the style and fullness of what preceded it. I do like the story otherwise.
Anonymous11 months agoI agree that this story BEGS for a follow up.
Milf Belinda really deserves some love. A "reunion" of the players in a third city where perhaps marc is owed a favor, Rush & company flies in between tour dates. Rush can shred her v card under the caring tutelage of Marc and the bi-protector-chick Coco.
Anonymous11 months agoI am not alone in feeling the ending was somewhat forced, a real shame after a delightful slow build-up. I wonder what happened to Emily -- not a single word about her after they left the hospital.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoYou left poor Emily out in the cold!
No refuge, and no updates.
No way to treat a friend!
matty_macabout 1 year agogreat story, but was very rushed in the end and so much could be added around the conflict
Tarloso2over 1 year agoIt's a great story but somuch more could be added...the virgin, the older mum,. Amazing potential
Tony_Gibsalmost 2 years agoI'm not usually drawn to romance, but I am to good writng and I especially like slow burns. I agree that more can be added to the story, as is the case with any strong foundation.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoA well written story that held my interest all the way through. It is realistic and plausible as all good fiction is. You obviously understand that readers will not accept over the top and unrealistic scenarios or the characters unlikely reactions to situations. Other than forgetting about the other girl in the car crash,Amelia,no contradictions just a nice flow. I must say that this tale ended too early.As much as this tale needs it to be fully complete,do not do a sequel to this just for the sake of doing so.Do so only if its well thought out and blends with the story..I could have kept reading. JZK
dirtyoldbimanabout 2 years agowhat is with no mention of Amelie's girlfriend also in the car crash? Think I would have made the story more about a week or so at St. Peter's place with no press finding them. 3 sexy topless women tanning and teasing him, then Tracy and Allie make 5 beautiful women tanning and showering
