Shade's Destiny Ch. 04

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(I'm editing this. I wrote how many had seen me nude. I laughed. I hope, dear reader, you will appreciate the irony. My 'new normal' only took into account my 'now.' Everyone and everything from before was distant, irrelevant.)

Kim did come home and made dinner. The sisters giggled as I devoured it. Shade reminded me of tonight without giving me any idea of what was ahead. The only thing that tempered my appetite was her lips on mine. Yeah, I got a chuckle writing that. Amazing what a heart can help a girl understand (learn?) about love.

I really did need to get some rest. I didn't think sleep was a good idea plus I wasn't sure I could. Shade told me we had to be at the party around 7 pm. I wanted some quiet time. We agreed that I would lay out on the bed while she showered and dressed. No, I was sure I didn't need a nap. She kissed me and insisted on pulling the sheet over me. I heard the water run in the shower and smiled, thinking of the afternoon.

I was on stage, nothing but a single spotlight on me. I heard the music and could feel the vibe of the crowd pressing in and around me. I was dancing to the music; it was slow, steady, with just the right amount of bass. I felt beautiful, knew every eye was only on me. I tingled, every nerve firing deliciously. I couldn't see faces; didn't care. I felt their eyes devour me. It was erotic; I was limber, loose and free. I was Wonder Woman, on stage, dancing for a crowd. I heard screams as I ran my hands over curves, dips, cupping my breasts, slipping fingers down my hips, teasing, covering pussy and moving suggestively, swaying, licking my lips, thrusting my hips. I felt her eyes on me. I couldn't see her but I felt her. She wanted me. I lost everything but her. I knew others wished for me to be theirs. She was to be the one this night. She moved toward the stage. I felt it build. When she kissed me I would explode. I would be hers. Her eyes never left mine. She came closer still. Please hurry!! I want you to want me!

Out of the darkness she came. Oh my god she's so beautiful. I was still moving, hips swaying, touching, alive, praying, begging with my eyes for her kiss. A kiss will set me free. A kiss will release the fiery ball of energy sitting on the launching pad, waiting for the firing sequence. She came to me with her knowing eyes. No words needed! She put a hand on my face. I bent to her gorgeous face, she kissed me. Ignition sequence begun; we have liftoff!

"Destiny honey, why are you screaming? Are you okay baby? Oh god ... Kim!!" What? Why is Shade here? She was taking a shower! Where am I? I was in the middle of an orgasm and Shade's calling for her sister. Why? Love me baby. Shade was crying. "Destiny, you were asleep. It must have been some kind of bad dream. I'm here lover. It's okay." I pulled her to me, desperate to make love to her. I kissed her, hands roaming over her body. Just love me. Please Shade. She pulled away from me. What? "Honey talk to me. You're scaring me."

I was so frustrated, so horny. And I didn't understand why she pulled away from our kiss.

I told her about the dream. That I'd seen her in the throng, saw her eyes, felt her presence. I saw the understanding come into her eyes. She smiled as I told her how I wanted her to come on the stage. That, though I didn't know who she was, I knew she was the one who would set me free, give me what I needed so desperately. I tried to tell her the rest of it but her mouth stopped me. She kissed me. Oh my god she kissed me. It was my turn to cry. She heard me. She knew!! Oh yes ... you're here, I'm here. Please, please Shade. She did. Details? Oh no. This was just for us!!

As we lay together, after, I smiled as I thought of hearing the door open and close. Poor Kim. Twice in one day. Shade no doubt knew what I did ... the party. THE PAINT! We both eeked, she looked and relaxed. Oh thank god.

Author's Note: As ever, this is a flight of fantasy; completely fictitious. If there is any resemblance to anyone walking among us my apologies. Another author put it so well: "The site is free. The author is 'paid' in comments and votes." I hope you've enjoyed yet another chapter of a rather long tale. Plenty more coming soon!

This chapter is dedicated to Someone very special - LVS!! And Her cmS!! What was written about Libby is so close to my heart for reasons known to S/so F/few. The tears in my eyes are real. My contempt for those who abuse others for fun and/or profit? Hell hath no fury!! "If It Hurts, It Isn't Love" is more than just a book!

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Masterpiece!

What a fantastic chapter! Well done.

elle_9549elle_9549almost 9 years ago
Yes!

The L word, indeed! That, and Libby turned out to be a horrible so-called "friend". I agree with your personal note at the end.

On to the next chapter!

~ L

lameezjohnsonlameezjohnsonover 10 years ago
Wow

Okay, last one, i could not wait to comment. I want to adjust my previous comment, Libby is ugly. That aside, this chapter is brilliant. The dialogue is awsome and Shade and Destiny are so adorable, I get off just by reading about their steamy interludes. The body paint is a stroke of genius and last but not least, the love they share is beautiful, you can feel it, but only because of the authors amazing talent to infuse life into her characters. Salute!

beentheredonethatbeentheredonethatover 10 years ago
Very Interesting

i hardly ever comment but after reading chapter 5 i intended to start at the first one but could not resist reading this first. This is so good now i really am going back to start from the beginning,

adidasgaladidasgalover 10 years ago
HAUNTINGLY BEAUTIFUL

Pge01 had me reaching for the tissues (damn tears) but then halfway down Pg02, I stalled I was clearly reminded of my earlier comment, What and Who is Shade. The Where was blatantly obvious, TORMENTING Destiny, again. Destiny blacked out and I fervently wished I could do the same. Sigh! needless to say, I had to stop reading. All I am prepared to say is: Shade's face jumped at me from the screen, and her forceful nature lured me back to the chapter with promises of all not being what it seems and that it will get better *shrug* LoL. True to her word, I found myself laughing at their antics with Kim and Constance, At Destiny's newfound confidence in challenging Shade about Stacey (I knew it!) and also had me sniffing, again (stupid tears) at Shade's tenderness. Their shananigans in the bedroom, had me HOT under the collar, not forgetting the body painting "SHOO!" *grin* WHAT A ROLLERCOASTER OF EMOTIONS!! Unwittingly my perception of Shade has changed while witnessing the growing love between her and Destiny. (For now at least) What a turnaround *REMARKABLE*

*****

Thank you Vixen for sharing your views and feelings at bottom of page

*** YOU ARE SPECIAL ***

sbrooks103sbrooks103over 10 years ago
Naked Vegas

For the body-painting fans out there, I highly recommend SyFy channel's "Naked Vegas".

JogrindeJogrindeabout 11 years ago
Tom Tom of lovely characters

Your a true talent just like the painter and her brushes, you have seriously brushed the characters and situations of the story in perfect strokes of fine art writing of erotica & love.

I like the way you navigate the characters through their experiences, feelings and thoughts ( Tom Tom of writers with GPS & goodle maps in one ) LOL

1Martiniman1Martinimanover 11 years ago
Amazing chapter!

I have sat back and watched the comments roll in, but I waited until the whole story was posted, now it's time to speak up and pat my friend on the back. My friend, or as I call her...MY Goddess, has woven a wonderful and magical tale of lust and love. Yes, I'm very biased, but very honest in my feelings for Shade, Destiny and Kim. When I received the first draft for this story it was a mere 4,000 words, and although good, I challenged Vixen to turn this into an epic tale of wonder...it was waiting to be unleashed inside her original 4,000 words. Not only did Vixen accept my challenge, she took every idea, twist and turn I threw at her and she spun it into pure gold...in her own words. No matter how deep, dark, twisted, sexual, degrading and delicious my idea was, Vixen listened and then spun it on its head until she had it perfect. I don't mind telling you, if I had written this story it would have been much more sexual and dirty, yet it would have been nowhere near as good of a story. Vixen is just that good! She took our idea, dare I say dream, and she made it a fantastic reality in print to be enjoyed and savored forever. From first draft to the last chapter being posted took just over 5 months of grueling nightly work and many days, that's the dedication and heart that was out into this story. Vixen...you are a Goddess! Thank you Vixen for the wonderful ride and the opportunity you gave me to join you on this journey. I will always look at and read Destiny's Shade with great pride and joy!

Libby, Libby, Libby...how dramatic, sexual and suspenseful can you get. Perfectly written I might add. Oh...and then we add on the Halloween painted on costume. Not only was the costume hot, but the process was even hotter!

If you haven't read this story yet, please do so, then vote! You will be treated to a wonderful story you will remember for years.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Well, well ...

You are truly a remarkable author. Your style makes us, the readers feel as though we're 'there' with you while you write. In other words, you have the gift of allowing us to be the 'voyeur', if you will. This is a story of mixed emotion ... sad, humorous as well as being wonderfully erotic. I loved it, thank you for sharing.

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