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But I knew that most of society would frown upon us for our investors relationship. Mom never approved, and eventually after Teá hit nineteen, mom had enough, blew a gasket, and kicked us out; disowning us. I was thankful that I had enough money at this point that I was able to buy us a house; a one study one bedroom house that was rather pleasing looking.
I ended up marrying Teá, and the countless nights of making love finally caught up to us and she became pregnant. We only had one child; daughter, who we named Monica, but that was good enough for us.
I guess everything worked out in the end for the both of us. I had a wife that I knew would never hurt or betray me, with a bond that was made more special due to us being family, and Teá had a husband that loved how she already was, her chubbiness and huge birthmark.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 6 years agoYou ruined it with how naive the characters got and you made me wonder how old you are to write such a ridiculous story.
Anonymousover 7 years agoBullshit on his friend being cool with it and bullshit on them getting married. Keep writing.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoA good storyline that just got butchered by errors, changes in basic information etc
As has been pointed out an editor (or even just a printout and actually READ by the author) might have caught those.
I give 2 stars because it's not easy coming up with an idea, producing it, and putting it out here for the world to see.
Would like to see more, but only after an understanding of getting details, grammar and such, worked out. You're just wasting time if you're not going to get better.
