- Romance
- Silver Pt. 10
- Page 4
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Marlene reached behind me and grasped my hair. "I love you too, Handsome, I will never stop."
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I stirred to the sound of the chirping birds and felt the new pain in my stomach muscles as I attempted to sit up. Crawling from under the warmth of the flannel sheets, I quietly dressed and made my way to the kitchen. "Man's best friend," I laughed as I passed Misty snoring next to the bed on Marlene's side. The coffee tasted exceptionally good that morning, and I reasoned the wonderful flavor was due to the licking my tongue had given to Marlene the previous night. Well, it sounded good anyway! The muscles in my stomach kept reminding me of the strenuous workout I had the previous night, but I wasn't going to admit that to Marlene.
Misty raced down the hallway, sliding on the hardwood floors as usual, stopping short of the sofa, and took off for the bedroom again. I stood at the kitchen counter, pouring my second cup of coffee as Misty rounded the corner, shortly followed by Marlene.
"Rough night?" I asked with a grin.
"Real funny," Marlene giggled as she wrapped her arms around me.
"Easy, easy, Beautiful, blind man with a hot pot of coffee"
"Maybe the blind man should put that pot down," she groaned.
I placed the coffee pot back onto the burner and turned to face her for a morning kiss.
"Feel what I have on," she teased, reaching up and stroking my hair.
I discovered Marlene wearing one of my old flannel shirts. It was loosely opened in the front with the exception of the three lowest buttons holding it closed just above her naval. The material clung to the inside of her breasts as it gradually opened up to her shoulders. The shirt tail draped down to mid-thigh, and she finished her look with her white satin panties which I found to be inconspicuously covering her soft, warm hiny. .
"Now, that is sexy," I grinned as I slipped my hand under the flannel material and caressed her warm breast.
"You like?" she purred while looking up at me.
"I love," I replied as I kissed her soft, full lips and felt her nipples harden under my touch.
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Misty dived nose first into her food bowl. Her tags jingled against the metal rim as she engulfed every last morsle of kibble. "Did she come up for air?" I asked Marlene as we sat at the kitchen table sipping from our mugs.
"It doesn't seem like it," Marlene giggled.
"What's on the calender for today?" I asked.
"We have some very important decisions to begin making," she replied, taking her hand and placing it over mine.
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Hoping you enjoyed part 10! As Marlene stated, her and Michael have a lot of important decisions to contemplate. There are many plans to make for the upcoming September wedding, so stay tuned!
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Remember, be nice to each other. Say hello to people you pass; it may be the only act of kindness they receive that day...
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 5 years agoI have noticed that one of Marlene's girls was Margie until chapter 8 ( with ending that emotionally ruined me in the middle of a night, until I realized it is not the last chapter), but since more happy continuing at chapter 9, she renamed herself as Marjie. :-)
Captain_Fapulusover 7 years agoBelieve it or not I was thinking of you and your story this morning over my cereal hoping there was a new chapter up someday soon, then lo and behold this gem posted today! And once more you exceeded all of my expectations, Michaels revelation of his vision might be a tough cookie to swallow but brought them even closer together and showed his view of her and her position in his life. I feel it for her mom having to be under the same roof with two soon to be newlyweds, hope her coffee with the neighbours was rewarding and the following night she caught up on sleep - if there is anyone who understand those two it's her. Their usual witty conversations (Michaels mostly to be honest) were the perfect companions to the more "time for themselves" orientated chapter, and it's a good thing after all the physically and emotionally draining days they had. Thus the story is taking a major turn for better, not that it was bad to begin with, but a life together with new challenges and all those remarks every day is a tough one to plan so it's a real treat to watch it unfurl with each new chapter.
Can't get enough of Marlene in her little girl mode when things tickle her fancy, the observatory venue the best possible example of it. Her squeals and moans are so adorable I would pet her just like Misty. What I did not expect was for her to be wiped out by the wedding talks at the venue, she's a lawyer and she should be able to talk for days (professional experience *wink wink*). Guess Michael-charger will have to do its magic over the weekend to replenish her batteries.
The obligatory error hunting quest was a bit more bountiful this time 'round:
- several cases of double comma (1x on page 1 and 2 respectively);
- “darer of bad news” instead of “bearer of bad news” on page 2;
- “away fromeverything” instead of “away from everything” on page 1;
- “swwallow” instead of “swallow” on page 3;
- “vowels” instead of “vows” on page 3;
Hopefully it helps so you can better next time, I know we demand highest quality in short time so don't take them too seriously ;)
5* is as self explanatory as is my love for cookies!
My high expectations were rightly justified and for that I thank you!
biphilmassover 7 years agoI love this story between two people who are so much in love it even seems that every time they make love and are around each other their love deepens even more and more. 5 stars and please keep up the writing.
