All Comments on 'Snow Dancing'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
very nice story!

very fun story. I loved the ending!!

msjay123msjay123over 15 years ago
would have been perfect if........

the story were longer and in more detail. more depth in their relationship, but i guess i'm just a hopeless romantic hahaha. was really good though!! i loved it!

sacksackover 15 years ago
An unusual plot....

I wish you would show rather than tell a bit more. Otherwise, witty and fun to read! Good luck in the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very nice!

Such a lovely, little story. Keep up the writing!

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