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by beltman70

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very nice!

Such a lovely, little story. Keep up the writing!

sacksackover 15 years ago
An unusual plot....

I wish you would show rather than tell a bit more. Otherwise, witty and fun to read! Good luck in the contest!

msjay123msjay123over 15 years ago
would have been perfect if........

the story were longer and in more detail. more depth in their relationship, but i guess i'm just a hopeless romantic hahaha. was really good though!! i loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
very nice story!

very fun story. I loved the ending!!

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