Spencer's Canyon

Nice! Hope this gets a follow up

Five Stars...

Where is the next chapter, please??!!

Great story but the ending was rather abrupt.That spoiled the build up of the story. What about Scott's interest in Alicia? And Linda? And further rounds with Elena?

We had the same experience with the Champaign. Please kiss and tell us another story (!)

Dam nice after school job. All I ever got was a paper route and mowing lawns and then on to the Navy, lol.

Hawt, Hawt, Hawt!

11/10!!!!!

From a guy named Spencer (no lie!)

Almost the X-Rated version of Elvis Presley's "Tickle Me". [LOL] 5 stars; although there should have been more of the story.

Are you a mean person that gets a threal out of hurting your readers? I can imagine that to be the case as what began as a story with soo many paths opened and yet ended with a unfinished whimper.

What a great story, full of characters and sex, well thought out plot, hope to see more soon.

I can imagine a series of ten or more chapters to explore this new paradise for a horny 22 year old. Linda sounds interested as well AND there's Elena's daughter to be "had". Maybe wedding her and the legacy continue?

You certainly should add to this one, it has the start of an awesome series all over it.

Be good if you carried this one on. Been reading all your stories and really enjoyed them. Guess I'm a fan now! Might even set up an account now!

Deff want to read more of his adventures! Please let us know soon!

Please more!!!!!!!

So many unfinished stories. You need to get busy again. Your fans are waiting.

Co-workers and clients; so many possibilities and "only" 4 months or does he decide to not go back to school? Write on!

Nice story but page 4 let it down. So much more could be written. It has the makings of a very good story. Add more please

I definitely want to hear more about events at the Canyon.

I would like to see him sample a wide variety of women. A tall slender redhead with not overly sized breasts, a shorter latina with big breasts and a full round butt, a milk chocolate honey, etc.

My suggestion would be for Alicia to turn out to be Alicia Spenser, Elena's daughter. Perhaps a threesome with Scott, Alicia and Elena? Doesn't necessarily have to be incestuous (that's up to you), could be just Elena and Alicia sharing Scott together. Then, if the story goes on for a while, perhaps Scott could eventually marry into the family?

And maybe an end-of-season pussy-eating contest between Scott and the new girl, who so impressed Elena during her "interview". That would give Scott the whole season to hone his pussy-eating skills on the various guests and staff.

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One thing seemed off to me, you twice mentioned the large, limo parking spaces, but who would want to take their immaculate, stretch limo down a "narrow gravel road" with a "tight hairpin turn" in it? If I owned a limo, I wouldn't want to risk messing up the paint job by taking it down a narrow, gravel road through the woods.

And if all of the locals know the resort is there, what's the sense in simply disguising its entrance? Anyone could still drive down there. A fence and guard shack, somewhere along a totally paved driveway, would have made more sense. It might be different if the clientele was showing up in 4x4s & SUVs to a rustic resort, but this is ultimately a high-end, luxury one.

Granted these are minuscule points in a sex story, but a good author (which you are) should strive for all aspects of the story to make logical sense.

"The difference between fiction and reality? Fiction has to make sense."

~ Best-selling author, Tom Clancy