Stepping Out in Faith Ch. 05

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hudsbart
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Marcus' hand squeezed around the sensitive head of Andy's cock, sending electric shocks through Andy's body. Andy was shaking uncontrollably now, the feeling of Marcus' thick cock driving deep into his body, Marcus' weight holding him down and the teasing of Marcus' thumb against that sensitive spot just under his cock head—all of it was overloading his senses, every cell in his body vibrating with a deep seated need to find completion with Marcus.

Andy reached back to bury his fingers into Marcus' curls, pressing their cheeks and foreheads other. His other hand was stretched out in front of him, bracing himself against the force of Marcus' thrusts. He was so close, and if the way Marcus' arms were tightening around him was any indication, Andy could tell that Marcus was right there with him.

"Andy," Marcus murmured his name against Andy's lips.

"Marcus, my love."

"Oh god, Andy, oh my god," Marcus was mumbling incoherently, his body shaking as he rushed toward the edge.

"Yes, my love, yes. Oh, Marcus," Andy exclaimed as he felt Marcus explode inside his body, flooding his ass with searing hot cum.

The feeling of Marcus convulsing inside him and around him was too much, with Marcus' tight grip on his cock and the lava of Marcus' cum in his bowels, Andy followed the love of his life right over the edge, spewing cum all over Marcus' hand and drenching the pillow under his hips.

"I love you," Marcus' voice just barely audible. "More than I thought possible to love someone."

"I know," said Andy, just as quietly. "I love you the same way."

*****

The intersection of the Christian faith and homosexuality is an area that I found myself exploring several years ago. I've found a way, on a personal level, to reconcile what some people consider to be two opposing world views. This story was my attempt to bring some of those realizations to life through Andy and Marcus. And just to be clear, the story is entirely fiction—aside from Andy's theological revelations, there are no autobiographical elements. I hope you have enjoyed Andy and Marcus' journey as much as I have.

Yours,

Hudson Bartholomew

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Very good, thank you!

Cane23Cane236 months ago

Beautiful story. Author is digging deeper into character psychology, giving us insight into their feelings, fears, dilemmas etc. A catholic priest, torn between believes, loyalty to the church and his own sexuality and love. The way the protagonists build up their mutual feelings accompanied by some of the most beautiful, most sensual, hot erotic scenes is written in exceptionally unique and profound writing style.

Kabba118Kabba118over 2 years ago

I actually finished reading this story at 3am and tried to comment but for some reason I couldn't. Author, this story is six years old. If you aren't published by now, you absolutely should be. I agree with others in that this is one of the best stories on Lit- period. And here's why:

The story itself. As a progessive Christian and someone in the community I and many others understand this journey all to well. Sometimes it's a person, sometimes it's a situation that brings you to the realization that God made you in His perfect image, and God loves you just as you are. What a powerful message to share, and thank you for being brave enough to do so.

The characters. There is something lovable about both Marcus and Andy. The story was focused on Andy's "becoming" but it also gave a glimpse into Marcus finding himself. He was hanging out in clubs and having randos here and there, but he was clearly lonely. Andy's need for him (as tumultuous as it was) was what Marcus needed to realize he wanted more from this life he was living. Everyone was trying to push this Charles guy on him but no one could give Marcus what he was looking for: to be loved, needed, cherished and adored. Andy did that from day one, which is why he was drawn to him, which is why he couldn't let go. I felt the emotions of both characters, their struggle, their anger, their love and their fears. They both had some growing to do, and they did it together.

The sex. Holy shit- literally! From their first encounter it was clear their attraction was electric. I love that it was all surrounded by Andy's "first time" but I kind of feel like it was Marcus's first time too, making love to someone. That's why he fell in love so easily. But besides all that, you write your sex scenes so well. I was in the room, I could see their bodies, hear their moans for each other. It was truly erotic literature.

I just love when older stories show up for me to read and I get blessed with a gem like this. And it truly was a blessing. And I haven't even read the epilogue yet! 😁

Keep writing!

-KK

dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

Dear Author: As a recovering catholic this story moved me deeply. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

One of the best stories I’ve read. Loved it.

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