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Click hereKelly watched her husband open his mouth, expecting him to comment on her cum splattered pussy. It was not words that exited from her husband's open mouth, it was his tongue. Kelly grabbed hold of the headboards with a smile as she clenched her vaginal muscles to expel the remnants of the servants buried deep inside of her into the waiting mouth of her husband.
It was a very interesting captivating story. His sudden capitulation at the end seemed out of character. It would be interesting to see alternative endings to the story with John becoming partially submissive but not turning everything over to his wife. There also could be a total break up with John deciding to divorce her find another person, marry and have children. It would also be interesting to have a little more insight into the dominatrix character and also with John not giving in every time they masturbated him and his wife satisfied herself with him eating the servants cum. in summary there could be many alternative last chapters that I do not have the skill to write.
another writer in his bio that says he is "straight" just let the mask slip already, in this day and age come out as what you really are. Anyway stupid illogical disgusting story where people do things as usual that make no sense.
Congratulations, you wrote a terrible story. No wonder you left it where it finished back in 2014. Even idiots must get bored of writing stupid unrealistic tales.
Yes I read the part about negative comments and to just read something else. You must have a very sick mind to think this up and then write it. You need mental help.
While I'm sure there is appeal to the story like others it smacks of pure fantasy. While there are men that are willing to eat another man's cum out if their wife's cunt, and places like FetLife are full of them, you can't expect anyone to believe that even after 4 days of teasing by the wife he would submit that easily. Most would have left after the first encounter. And probably gotten a divorce the second they were stateside.
I was enjoying the story, although as it went on it smacked more and more of manipulation, deceipt and all the things that destroy relationships. But the last chapter - that was rape, non-cencent, deceipt, rape inprisonment. Theyd be facing charges. Whatever fantesies couples may discuss or have, not all will be ones they actually want to do. Pegging, in a relation ship between a couple in private, fine but this is sick