Sunrise Sunset Ch. 05

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"Fine by me," I responded. "Maybe we could go back to St Martin like the first time. Hell, maybe I could even coax you back to that nude beach again."

Ellen laughed out loud. "You must be kidding. I was nervous enough 25 years ago. I'd hate to think about going there with this body I have now. I'd have to spend a lot of time in the gym before this body would be something I'd want anybody to see naked."

"Don't sell yourself short," I chuckled wiggling my eyebrows a la Groucho Marx. "I happen to like seeing you naked. I'd love to see your little bare butt running around here."

She laughed. "Ha! Flattery will get you everywhere, Mr. Dirty Old Man. Maybe I'll start showing a new side of me, my backside. Maybe I'll start running around here naked more often, but not tonight. I have plans for tonight, and I have dibs on the big TV. If you want to watch something, you'll have to go upstairs."

"So what's the big event?"

"Ironically," she explained, "The PBS channel is showing a taped production of 'Fiddler on the Roof', and I'm going to enjoy the hell out of it."

"Fiddler?" I questioned. "How's that ironic?"

"Fiddler," she answered, "is the first live stage production Jennifer ever went to. My mom, Jennifer's mom, and I took Jenny to see it on her eighth birthday. She was mesmerized with the music and live actors. I don't think she even blinked the entire time. It was so cute when we left. She was dancing down the street singing, "Sunrise, Sunset, Sunrise. Sunset, doo dah, doo dah, day. She kept telling her mom that when she grew up and got married she wanted to dance to that song."

My body quivered. Try as I might to fight it, I started to cry, and ran out of the room.

"Mike? Mike sweetie? What's wrong? Are you ok?" Ellen was calling as she followed me into the living room.

I got myself under control, and said, "I'm sorry. I guess I was thinking of Jenny's problems over the past few months. Besides, that song has always gotten to me."

"Huh," Ellen said. "In all these years, I don't think I've ever seen this super sensitive side of you."

"Well," I answered, "maybe we both have some sides we still need to see. If you don't mind another person in the audience, I think I'll watch that show with you tonight."

"Whoa," she said pulling back in mock surprise. "Watching a musical with me? Maybe this second honeymoon thing is affecting your brain."

Maybe it was. Maybe it was.

(The End)

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JohnnyRebBBJohnnyRebBBover 2 years ago

Well done and good ending

Rapier875Rapier875almost 5 years ago
That was wonderful.

Sensitive, touching, romantic, raunchy - and hot !

The first 4 chapters were great, the 5th - even though you warned us - was a bit of a let down after what had gone before.

I wasn't keen on the 4-somes eithef, but the scenes with Mike and Jennifer were really good. Just a shame it all had to come to an end.

Rapier

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
This is the BEST story I've read on here thank's so much.

Great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

It was a great story about the fallout from selfish stupidity. And it was brilliantly written but...Jenny had to deal with ehr issues head on. Mike didn't make the effort to reconnect with his wife until she made the first step. And unlike poor Keith she will never learn that her husband was screwing around, or the swapping.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awesome tale

Thanks for this awesome tale, chapter 5 is slightly different. Hope you will continue your writing, reading your work is a treat. Good job and the series deserves its high score.

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