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Josie grabbed one of the towels and spread it on the sofa nearest the TV and sat on it. Adam and I sat on the opposite sofa.
"Thank you Josie" I said.
"I just fucked your husband, in front of you, and enjoyed every minute of it. It might be hard for the average wife to understand, out of context, why you would want to thank me. But I understand and I'm grateful to you too."
Adam looked at me and said, "I could make a documentary film about the experience and what led up to it but I don't think the world is ready for that. Why don't you write it up as a story and publish it to Literotica Lynn? I bet there are at least a few folks who will find at least some parts of the story arousing."
- COMMENTS
Librandesireover 4 years agoAuthorAll true. I was not trying to write a low intensity, low visualization, high literary work of art. It was intended to be a page-turner of the sort of a Steven King novel. I regret that you lost interest and stopped reading. But thank you very much for the willingness to start. I was using the convention that says that zero to nine are spelled out but that 10 and above are not.
Anonymousover 4 years agoThis starts with many paragraphs of exposition, some of them huge, of telling and not showing. We're told age, height, weight, body type, chest hair even bra size! All these things should come out during the story, not as a giant info dump. It's like you were rushing to get all the statistics out of the way to get to the explicit sex as fast as possible. I did not find the "Do this. Do that" sex erotic, but rather mechanical in a porn movie way. There is no engaging of the senses at all.
There are quite a few errors along these lines: "...simultaneously said "get on your hands and knees" This should be: "....said, "Get on your hands and knees" I quit reading soon after that.
Numbers under 100 must be written out,e.g., "Thirty-fours years old." The conversations are merely described but not written as conversations because of the hurry to the sex, I assume.
AmieLynnLovealmost 7 years agoWhat a story. Character development was very good as was the initial setting of the stage. The description of the sex was long and outstanding......none of the wham-bam descriptions you often see. All in all, one of the best stories I've ever read on Literotica.
I would love to hear what transpires between Adam and Lynn afterwards, as well as between Josie and Donna......I'm sure both would be dynamite. Somehow, down the road I see a threesome with Lynn hooking up with Josie and Donna.....possibly with Adam watching/filming.
Please add another chapter to this outstanding story.
irvlynabout 8 years agoWhen you're hot you're hot; when not, not. Philosophy is not usually explored at such length on Lit, but overall yours is expressed with clarity, if not brevity. Makes sense, but the length seems to take it beyond an intelligent approach to uninhibited sexuality into the outer edges of apology.
As a devotee of dirty talk ("put your COCK in her CUNT") the mixture of reason and sexual frenzy intensifies the eroticism. Short version: good boner shit! Well done. My partner and I have had threesomes of both orders and I get how intense it is watching as well as being watched.
Interestingly, where we live it is harder (pun) to find an acceptable man than a desirable and willing woman -- outside of the swing lifestyle, which we do not frequent.
Please write more. I feel lucky to have come across your story.
Anonymousover 9 years ago"Adam has been my beacon. The more open I became, the closer we became. The more open he became, the closer we became." This was the line!
