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Wednesday the routine was back to normal. Both mum and dad worked. With their long weekend now complete they'd set off early. I'd been asked if I'd cover the later shift in the warehouse and Mandy feigned an urgent doctors appointment - stomach cramps she said. I heard her on the phone talking to someone at work, telling them she would be in late. A few minutes later a call came back from her concerned line manager telling her it would be fine to take the day off. Almost as soon as she'd completed the call she came into my room.

"I've blagged the day off," she said. "Fuck me."

"You want me to fuck you so hard you'll get stomach cramps?" I asked, with a straight face, then immediately laughed my head off."

"Can't you ever be serious? Mandy growled.

"OK," I offered. "But I'm not quite in the mood to fuck you."

"Liar!" she retorted, "Well I am," And she began to unbutton her blouse.

"Why get dressed?" I asked, "If you're skipping work."

"BECAUSE," she answered, as if I was a 5 year old kid asking the question, "Mum and Dad were around and I didn't want them to know." Blouse discarded she fumbled with her bra clasp."Fuck" she said, "This is an awkward one. Can you help?"

I could tell the problem straight away. New bra, tight hooks. I could smell her shampooed hair, her antiperspirant, her cheap copy perfume. Cupping her now free breasts I thumbed her nipples. She shivered. My love rod was stirring. "How about I watch you sexily removing the rest?"

She stood, turned to face me without moving away. Slowly unhooking her skirt she inched it down, wiggling her hips before releasing it to drop to the floor. "I want your pussy uncovered just as slow, right up close." Mandy obliged. I kissed her pussy lips, letting my tongue trace the line of her groove.

"Move," she commanded, "Then you can lick me out." We changed places, my cock now full, springing out as I pushed back the covers. My tongue felt good against the smoothness, pussy freshly shaved again that morning. "I haven't touched myself this morning," she said, "I want it fast."

"Spread your legs then," I answered bluntly. My sister and I were still nowhere near in sync with each other. With my tongue now working frantically and directly on her clit, Mandy soon sailed over her first peak.

She turned over, doggy style, "Now fuck me hard," her next command. Eager to please and eager to satisfy my own bulging erection I gave it her, my butt moving faster than a speeding bullet. We both grunted together as I blissfully pumped all I had into her cave. This bitch, however, wasn't for giving in easy and if I queried her, all I got was it was my idea in the first place. If the book hadn't arrived then we would still be the regular, arguing brother and sister.

Mandy wanted it again before lunch and once more after tea, before mum and sad arrived home. I wasn't going to argue.

***

There were times when I hypnotised Mandy again, this time with her consent. I made her cum, one time, harder than she'd ever cum before ... but quietly for we were on a seat in a busy shopping mall. We walked hand in hand as lovers do, we kissed as lovers do. I made Mandy cum on a park bench after she'd walked around all day in a short skirt, with no knickers, bending over at my command in front of anyone who might be around. I'd agreed with Mandy that I wouldn't fuck Elaine or Zara**, though I did continue the hypno-cum sessions with Elaine.

It was over a year before Mandy met another boy. Our love affair hadn't ended but she had found her true soul mate. Our love continued, but we were apart. She moved in with Ken and they married. I still see her, at times, when she needs some extra love.

**OK, I lied to Mandy and I did stray from our special bond, but so not to spoil a happy ending I'll tell you, if you wish, in another story.

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

You should write non-porn stories . Your attention to detail is very-good , you could easily become a professional writer

happywriter007happywriter007over 6 years ago
99% was great!

But the end sucked. I wish I could write like that but I have one over on you... I never leave my guest longing in the end....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Horrible 2nd half

I personally don't want to hear about him going into a hairy granny.

Where was Zara when there was so much build up for her?

Why would he not just make his parents forget that he has been with his sister and they can do it whenever they want.

If he seemed to not want to lose her so much then why not make her stay with him.

Like another comment said. Why not Him, Mandy and Zara.

Why show that he can literally tell someone to cum or make them cum whenever they do something and not delve further into that power?

Poorly written ending imo and that was where anything remotely interesting happened.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
my reply to your reply

I know this problem. A good start that captures the reader is an art that has to be learned. The ending is another story though. There is no rule to bring the story to a final end that makes it impossible to continue. I just explain it to you from my perspective as a reader, that in my mind this relationship was still a fresh one. It would have been easy to leave the future open and unwritten to let the reader finnish the story in his own mind. You made it very clear that you didn't intend to write a sequel but maybe a spin-off. You wouldn't own anyone a sequel if you just ended the story with an open end on a happier note. No writer owes anything to his/her readers. After all they are all artists. So I accept your decision to fade it out into a distant memory of the past. It's just depressing and reminds us that all happyness ends someday. By pushing the events of this story into the past it aged the reader too as its witness. There are stories that do it way more dramatic and narrators tend to jump forward some decades to kill all their protagonists in agony just to make sure the story is over. I hate that. But that's just my personal impression and your's isn't that drastic. A lot of people seem to be curious for a Zara Spin-Off. Go for it ... If you want. It's in your hands

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