by cinnamyn
Hope to see a long chapter tomorrow. Thanks for your story.
Still well written and still unsettling. Don't care for him turning her into a painslut when she wasn't. I think that is permanent harm. The disconnect from her as a person is creepy. It also seems you are setting it up for her to remain with him after her owner returns. I would find that an unhappy ending. You have interested me enough to want to know how it unfolds.
Get the hell out of there before he seriously hurts you or worse. Neither man deserves you! Run Anna! Run!
It's just been chapter after chapter of her getting bashed now with no real progress in the story. Let's move things along please!