All Comments on 'The Buyer Ch. 06'

by cinnamyn

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Well.

It's just been chapter after chapter of her getting bashed now with no real progress in the story. Let's move things along please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Of course you have a choice Anna!

Get the hell out of there before he seriously hurts you or worse. Neither man deserves you! Run Anna! Run!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Still well written and still unsettling. Don't care for him turning her into a painslut when she wasn't. I think that is permanent harm. The disconnect from her as a person is creepy. It also seems you are setting it up for her to remain with him after her owner returns. I would find that an unhappy ending. You have interested me enough to want to know how it unfolds.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Glad to see another chapter.

Hope to see a long chapter tomorrow. Thanks for your story.

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