All Comments on 'The Dirty Trick'

As a woman this was super hot...I'd love to have my husband invite a dozen guys over to fuck me like a slut....have had two gangbangs and loved them...one of the best stories I've read!

Please, continue with this amazing story.

This has a good build-up to the action, but then gives very little description of the erotic action itself. Add paragraphs giving details of all the ways she is fucked.

Good job on your first story. I prefer a bit more build-up, but some don't. I do agree that the sex part needs to be more detailed and longer. 10 guys using a girl should last more that 3 paragraphs.

Keep up the good writing.

A little short but very horny, i was jealous!