All Comments on 'The Dirty Trick'

A little short but very horny, i was jealous!

Good job on your first story. I prefer a bit more build-up, but some don't. I do agree that the sex part needs to be more detailed and longer. 10 guys using a girl should last more that 3 paragraphs.

Keep up the good writing.

This has a good build-up to the action, but then gives very little description of the erotic action itself. Add paragraphs giving details of all the ways she is fucked.

Please, continue with this amazing story.

As a woman this was super hot...I'd love to have my husband invite a dozen guys over to fuck me like a slut....have had two gangbangs and loved them...one of the best stories I've read!