by julybear7
and a classic in the genre. It stirs the soul and makes me wonder if love can pass through the final veil.
Nice to read a story with a hint of enticement and clean refreshing building of passion. Look for more from you. Thanks!
Read it with interest. A good story. For what it's worth, natural gas isn't toxic. This fact didn't harm the story but I thought you may wish to know.
From somewhere beyond.... She was a young 14 yr. old girl and now she's thirtish... all in two or three months. They are for eternity. Oh, to have had that happen to me. I'd be a believer instead of a wisher.
Would love to have a sequel to this. Please consider it. Very good job enjoyed it a lot.
Strange her eye colour changed from green hazel combination, to dark brown.
This was a great story. I would really love to read a second story about Jack and Irish.
I found the ending not quit satisfying, as it didn't make sense to me. Still, it is overall a great story. Along time ago someone commented that natural gas isn't toxic. Actually is cam contain many dangerous chemicals and cause a range of unpleasant physical effects. If trapped in an inclosed space with natural gas, carbon monixide can buuld up, killing anyone trapped in yhr space. It is also highly flammable.