by julybear7
I found the ending not quit satisfying, as it didn't make sense to me. Still, it is overall a great story. Along time ago someone commented that natural gas isn't toxic. Actually is cam contain many dangerous chemicals and cause a range of unpleasant physical effects. If trapped in an inclosed space with natural gas, carbon monixide can buuld up, killing anyone trapped in yhr space. It is also highly flammable.
This was a great story. I would really love to read a second story about Jack and Irish.
Strange her eye colour changed from green hazel combination, to dark brown.
Would love to have a sequel to this. Please consider it. Very good job enjoyed it a lot.
From somewhere beyond.... She was a young 14 yr. old girl and now she's thirtish... all in two or three months. They are for eternity. Oh, to have had that happen to me. I'd be a believer instead of a wisher.
Read it with interest. A good story. For what it's worth, natural gas isn't toxic. This fact didn't harm the story but I thought you may wish to know.
Nice to read a story with a hint of enticement and clean refreshing building of passion. Look for more from you. Thanks!
and a classic in the genre. It stirs the soul and makes me wonder if love can pass through the final veil.