by Bazzza
I had to stop reading not even halfway through the first page. Why is this man stalking this poor girl? She can't help it, she has to be there because it's where she works. He appeared to me as like a vulture, Just awaiting his opportunity on an injured animal before attacking it. Which he did as soon as he saw her hurting. Hated this story or what little I read of it. Surely you could have come up with a better scenario for a story. And I'll bet that you tried to put a happy ending to her life, with him by her side.
Wonder why such a high portion of the Kiwis on the site are good writers?
Well done, brought the reader into the story!
Easy to read, well written!
Beautiful relationship and chemistry between two lovely people. The sex was great too. Beautifully describe and smooth flow of the story.
A story with characters I cared about and the kind of sex and intimacy I dream about. Well done.
Outstanding story! Great plot, well conceived and deployed and I thorougly enjoyed it. I'll look forward to your other stories with enthusiasm. ..Tim, Farmington Hills, Michigan, USA
Kudo's Author - funny, erotic and hero's abound - much more than whats not to like as it was well concieved and delivered with passion
A display of talent without recriminations of awkward unfairness often found here - a very good read.
Thanks again - More please - with high Regard
wonderful romance. Thank you for the time and effort it took you to write this story.