The Long Gun

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Our sex life grew by leaps and bounds. It wasn't unusual for us to make detours on the way back from the markets in Chiang Mai for an hour or two of loving. We came to know the quiet, forested areas around Mae Rim very well.

Using some of my funds, Fa and I built our home next to her parent's home. As we had planned, it had an especially large kitchen and dining area. We added on an office, warehouse and garage that we had not thought about.

We took some time out and were married. Although Mae Rim did not have a church, we were arranged to have a Buddhist minister from a nearby temple perform the ceremony for us. The entire village attended and celebrated our union. That night Fa informed me of her desire to start our family.

"My husband... " then she laughed. "My husband...Sorry, I like hear you my husband. Husband, we should start family now that we marry. Is ok with you?"

As I undressed her and suckled on her hard nipples, I replied, "what do you think?" I think she had at least three orgasms that night. I know I flooded her pussy several times before we fell exhausted in our bed.

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oldgraycatoldgraycat2 months ago

Wonderful story and now it is time for a follow up on the family just getting started.

PurplefizzPurplefizz11 months ago

Ending was too quick, the whole “getting the business off the floor” etc was over simplified, for example, no businessman who’s got a license to print money servicing a wholesale market is going to give it up without a fight, sometimes quite literally, you also skipped over a revisit to the bar the story is named after (otherwise whats the point), getting money from the US/Japan wired over for the truck and house build, talking to his Sister about getting married and the legal side of setting up a farmers cooperative in a foreign country. Sorry for the criticism, but that’s how it seems, after all, you described in detail what they ate etc, but skimped at the end, which spoilt it for me. 4/5 because I was enjoying it until the abridged ending section. Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

Rapier875Rapier875about 1 year ago

I love your stories but you need to work on the endings.

Too quick, too short, leaving the reader disappointed.

It's good we want more, but leaving us unsatisfied with the conclusion is not how a good author behaves.

But 5 Stars nevertheless !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

What a sweet story, I look forward to reading more. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great Love Story, More Sex Details Would Be Nice Though

Lots of character development and scene setup, mentions of sex happening but not lunch detail. Potentially borderline non erotica, more sex details would be nice. One of the best love stories I've read here though!

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