All Comments on 'The Note'

think. . . .detached retina, fractured cheekbone, need I go on?

Face slap was a no-go for me, also. I spent the rest of the story angry. You did well establishing that she likes it rough, but that caning sounded damaging. A for writing, C- for content.

It was unnecessary and unpleasant. The BDSM aspects were all right but that took the story over the abuse line for me. You write well but I can only give you three stars for the writing as the subject was not to my taste. Keep on writing -- you do it well but ...

I loved everything, i see a number of commenters who didnt approve of the face slapping but i absolutely loved it. It added more dominance to the scene. As long as it was all consensual i dont see a problem in it. I loved your writing bte. CONGRATULATIONS!

Waste of time to read this story. Not very erotic, and no reason for the caning