All Comments on 'The Play Pen'

Excellent, sexy, vivid writing. I particularly enjoyed the phrase, "she bloomed" to describe the opening of a woman's sexual organ with desire. I've not seen that used before. While I don't know if its original with you, I enjoyed your use of it.

Hope you don't mind if I steal it sometime.

A women's view of a day of pleasure. Fabulous writing. Almost wish we could be there when the friends cash in their gift Certicates.

Keep it up maggie

True whore! If she was so unsatisfied with her husband's sexual knowledge she could have explained to him her dissatisfaction. Rather than use a fantasy to have sex with another man. He should divorce her and not work to support a cheating whore, well she wasn't paid, so I guess she's just a slut!!