All Comments on 'The Play Pen'

True whore! If she was so unsatisfied with her husband's sexual knowledge she could have explained to him her dissatisfaction. Rather than use a fantasy to have sex with another man. He should divorce her and not work to support a cheating whore, well she wasn't paid, so I guess she's just a slut!!

A women's view of a day of pleasure. Fabulous writing. Almost wish we could be there when the friends cash in their gift Certicates.

Keep it up maggie

Excellent, sexy, vivid writing. I particularly enjoyed the phrase, "she bloomed" to describe the opening of a woman's sexual organ with desire. I've not seen that used before. While I don't know if its original with you, I enjoyed your use of it.

Hope you don't mind if I steal it sometime.