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Click hereAs Suzanne left, she glanced over her shoulder. The jovial scene the five girls were sharing with Ethan brought a tear to her eye. Not because it was wrought with tenderness but because she realized she was jealous of the ladies. She reached in her purse and clutched a vial of her serum. 'Why couldn't I have perfected this two months ago? I could've had him.' A smile percolated her lips, 'Maybe I could?'
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 3 years agoWhile the last post was four months ago, he's only doing one story per year. This series hasn't been touched in many years, so it's not looking good for a chapter 3.
RomantiKusjeover 3 years agoBeautiful well written story. Will there be a continuation? Would you allow other writer(s) to contribute or use the mentioned characters?
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoGreat continuation! I’m glad you found more inspiration to continue this story. As much as I’d love a sequel to all your work, I’m glad you prefaced that you don’t do it without reason. I love the addition of new characters while bringing back minor ones like Mrs. White and Britney. I was wary that there was a lot of conflict points that could’ve made too complicated of a plot, but I’m glad you were able to create a smooth resolution at the end. My only critique is that the story after the climax concluded too fast and there wasn’t a love scene with Britney that i was expecting. Again, great work as always
