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"What's going on Tom?"
"They are letting you go Rob."
"What for?"
"For God's sake Rob you are a mess. You are drinking too much, trying to fuck everything that moves and we now have creditors ringing the Raiders to track you down."
"The Raiders have offered you counselling and maybe if you get yourself sorted out they will welcome you back in some capacity. The ball is in your court. What do I tell them?"
"Tell them to go to hell Tom. I'm done with the Raiders."
I then walked out of the office. Packed my bags and left for Iron Plain. I was at my wit's end and had some scores to settle, starting with my so called mother's wedding anniversary party.
This is where I find myself lying in my friend's spare bed contemplating my past and my future. What to do? What to do?
To Be Continued...
- COMMENTS
Bebop3over 5 years agoAn excellent story so far. I look forward to reading the rest.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoBut there seems to be a total lack of likable characters in the story. Rob's such a bone headed dumbass that it's impossible to have much sympathy for him. Now he's going home looking for more trouble? UGH!
Anonymousabout 15 years agoKudos for a great start to a story. This is even better than your last, which I enjoyed very much.
Anonymousabout 15 years agoWell written story but not a very happy one with confusing plot. As anon in South America asked ,why sudden turn around on Jenny's part, also why did his Mom marry father in first place?
60 year old George
KOLKOREabout 15 years agoIt started on a slow note but picked up very nicely. I like the unique sence of time and place, in particular the culture of proffesional Rugby. Most importantly -I MUST read on now...
