All Comments on 'The Unanimated DBZ Chronicles Ch. 01'

Its a lemon (dirty fanfiction) it doesn't need to fit in the continiuum, as long as its not badly written sex, and thats what this is. Not bad, could be better, I liked it.

u should create a ch 2 cause this story was perfect

I really enjoyed this. It could use work here and there but I thought it was wonderful. I eagerly await a chapter 2.

i,m waiting for ur next submission man

please make more stories with vegeta! :)

Their where times whine he was alowed to come home.I don't see a problem.