by JoannaF
Their where times whine he was alowed to come home.I don't see a problem.
I really enjoyed this. It could use work here and there but I thought it was wonderful. I eagerly await a chapter 2.
u should create a ch 2 cause this story was perfect
Its a lemon (dirty fanfiction) it doesn't need to fit in the continiuum, as long as its not badly written sex, and thats what this is. Not bad, could be better, I liked it.