The Weekend Getaway Ch. 13

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"We have a boy", Brianna exclaimed.

"And I barely made it to be here for the birth", Ken replied.

"How did you manage to be here for this? I didn't even know that you were getting out anytime soon", Brianna said.

By this time Craig had pushed his way into the room near where Ken was standing by the bed. "Ken called me this morning and told me that he had been released, and asked if I would come get him and bring him home since you are not supposed to drive."

"I won the appeal Brianna. Yesterday the court said that I had been found guilty without any real proof that I had indeed committed the crime, and today I won my release and I wanted to be with my girl. There is a chance that I can be retried, but Jeff talked to the D. A. and she told him that she felt that she didn't have anything new to bring to trial and she would not bring it to court again unless new evidence ever turned up."

"Brianna, I owe you and Craig so much for sticking by me like you have the last few months. I want to name our son Brian Craig, after both of you if that is okay with you Brianna."

"Oh Ken, that is so sweet. It is fine with me if it is okay with Craig", Brianna replied.

The doctor and nurses gathered up their instruments and excused themselves so that they could have some privacy.

"It sounds wonderful to me. Well, I need to head back to the plant now. Brianna, you can have the usual 6 weeks maternity leave, and Ken you make sure you take care of her while she is recovering. Then I expect you both back at your desks where I hired you to be." Craig responded then made his way to the door of the hospital room.

He looked back one more time as he walked out the door to see Brianna holding Brian in her arms, as Ken stood at the bedside looking down at both of them with love in his eyes. He thought to himself as he walked down the hall, "They say that life is a circle, but he thought of it more as a journey. And in Brianna and Ken's case, it was a journey of love."

Author's Note:

I have thoroughly enjoyed writing this series. I had only intended to make a one chapter story, but because of feedback from my readers and my fiance', I continued it. I would love for each one of you that read this to vote and also leave me feedback on how you liked the whole series. I originally wrote a different "tragedy" ending, but after thinking about it, I decided that you would like this one better. Thank you, and I hope you continue to read my stories for many years to come!

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Excellent

Very well written, glad you decided to go more than one chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Overall I think it was a good story, and I am glad there was a happy ending. I am not going to nitpick legal facts even if it was rediculous.

0649d0649dover 13 years ago
mixed feelings, overall good, crazy ending

I would have preferred it if you just had them die in a car crash because he diddled his lover to an orgasm. It would be much better. I have a feeling that you were pressured to write an alternate ending that you were not prepared for and maybe you are just being ridiculous deliberately because you were pressured, haha

Being taken to court by a DA who is convinced of his guilt, a business lawyer representing them in a criminal case(?), being given a 10 year prison sentence, a prison guard fingering her, she fantasising her lover making her his bitch, then him being released on the same day she gives birth - just madness and unbelievable. Otherwise it was pretty darn erotic throughout the whole story, even in the prison scene!

bigguy323bigguy323over 13 years ago
You are wrong on almost every legal point. First, there is NO EVIDENCE that a crime was committed.

If someone FOLLOWING YOU drives into the ditch it is NOT your fault. Since he was UNAWARE of their accident, he could not be charge with leaving the scene.

Anyone who WILLINGLY has a BUSINESS specialist lawyer in a serious criminal trial is an idiot.

Sorry, I wanted conflict and tension, but this was ridiculous.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

No one would get that kind of sentence. In fact there is no way this would even go to court. I remember a time here when a divorce lawyer wrote an essay on divorce law. He explained that evidence of adultery would not affect the property settlement nor custody in all likelihood, and yet people keep writing as if it did. The legal part is the weakest part of the story. I would enjoy hearing a lawyers take on how it would go if the two were married and the driver of the vehicle did actually cause a fatal accident through negligence. Could there be a prosecution without proof of which one was driving. What if both just shut up and didn't say a word to the police?

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