All Comments on 'To Love & Obey Ch. 02'

Love it. Make it a lil longer and cant wait to read more

I love his pet names for her. Looking forward to reading more.

A

Take your time. No rushed. We will wait for you ma'am.

As the author below said. Take your time and tell your story the way you want to. Can't wai to see where this goes (meaning I can be patient and wait). Your heroine definitely has MY attention.

I loved keep going you try writing a bo1cok

You write these characters very well, but more impressive is that you're writing this on your phone?!? Crazy amounts of kudos to you!!

black with honey hair down to her waist???? ok she is hot

I want to thank everyone so much for the positive comments!!! I love the support

It was good but.... I think it should have been longer along with a few other mistakes... In my opinion... I am going to keep reading though ;)