by Moanae
It was good but.... I think it should have been longer along with a few other mistakes... In my opinion... I am going to keep reading though ;)
I want to thank everyone so much for the positive comments!!! I love the support
black with honey hair down to her waist???? ok she is hot
You write these characters very well, but more impressive is that you're writing this on your phone?!? Crazy amounts of kudos to you!!
As the author below said. Take your time and tell your story the way you want to. Can't wai to see where this goes (meaning I can be patient and wait). Your heroine definitely has MY attention.