All Comments on '"Touch me, slut"'

KittenViv,

Your first post is a good story that jumps directly into her subspace and makes it easy to visualize they play. Good use of dialogue, and I like her subtle flashes of attitude - something that always makes a sub more interesting

You write well and I hope you post more.

Good stuff, but i'd recommend trying to find an editor

Fuck the haters

I liked its to-the-pointedness, but I think its a bit short, but good nonetheless

4 stars for nice writing style ^^