by KittenViv
I liked its to-the-pointedness, but I think its a bit short, but good nonetheless
4 stars for nice writing style ^^
KittenViv,
Your first post is a good story that jumps directly into her subspace and makes it easy to visualize they play. Good use of dialogue, and I like her subtle flashes of attitude - something that always makes a sub more interesting
You write well and I hope you post more.