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Click here"No I can't have dinner with you on my next day off, but I'm free on my second day off."
"And when would that be?"
"Tuesday."
"Okay. Let me try this again. Would you like to have dinner with me next Tuesday?"
"Yes I would."
She took a bar napkin, wrote on it and handed it to me. "Call me so we can set it up. Got to go" and she got up and went back to work. Since I had just finished my third beer I figured that it was time for me to go.
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Tuesday at six I was at Cookie's front door and as I pushed the doorbell I was wondering where the next chapter of my life was going to take me.
- COMMENTS
Busman19639about 1 month agoNice story but you go off track with the comedy and then try to get the reader back on the story after. Too much distraction.
nixrox4 months ago1 star - you lost me as a reader on the first page when the idiot husband says he was still going to fuck his wife AFTER he found out she was fucking her boss. I would certainly NOT be putting my naked cock into that unknown cesspool of potential STDs. The rest of the story was a waste of time
truthandjustice995 months agoDo comedy in the middle of a story destroys the continuity Clean it up and resubmit
Sumnut968 months agoPeople bitching about jokes? Personally, I thought several were quite funny. 5 stars DMW aka
Anonymousover 1 year agoI was going to write about the constant jokes spoiling the story when a few others beat me to it. So I won't duplicate their effort even though I hugely agree. He goes to Houston, sees his wife & her boss hand in hand & cozy in the restaurant doesn't take pictures? Worse, after they go back to the hotel & sees the floor the elevator stops at, he doesn't go up after some time, stating it's room service, & then confront them while taking video? All those chances. What's the sense of going on that trip & then just look? Made no sense. 3 stars for a so-so story. Bob
Anonymousover 1 year agoIf it didn't have all the so called jokes and filler stuff it would have been a five. They became annoying very quickly, why were they there?
But as is it was a four.
Interesting that the ex wife got promoting (on merits) so I guess she came out a winner too.
