All Comments on 'Whore for Succubus Ch. 01'

You are clearly not an English Speaking First kind of person. Fix that.

I will use an editor.. thank you

Please rate the story

I found the way u wrote the story real cute and sexy at the same time. Ur English not being perfect made the story more stimulating. Maybe that's just me. Keep up the good work.

Oh! That story made me cum! Write more! Oh, and check your spelling!

I found the English as a Second Language, moderate grammatical errors style to actually be good. It added something to the story as a whole. The plot was great, too!

Get an editor. I'm an English major and I had to quit reading before I was 500 words into this. The amount of errors here ... makes my eyes bleed.