All Comments on 'Wife Put in Place'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
good 1st story

Suggest some sequel chapters. Some possibilities: Rahul takes her anal cherry, In another chapter Rahul can bring home a friend so his wife gets DPed and she has to do ass-to-mouth.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
wife rape fantasy

my wife has admitted to having a rape fantasy, and afterward I shared with her that I also have fantasies of her being raped.

anyone to discuss,

xirixATgmxDOTcom

arch3rarch3rabout 7 years ago

Loved it !! Please continue this soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Tenses! POV!

You keep skipping voice and perspective. You switch back and forth from talking in first person to second and it's confusing and distracting. I gave up.

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