by rkdog
You keep skipping voice and perspective. You switch back and forth from talking in first person to second and it's confusing and distracting. I gave up.
my wife has admitted to having a rape fantasy, and afterward I shared with her that I also have fantasies of her being raped.
anyone to discuss,
xirixATgmxDOTcom
Suggest some sequel chapters. Some possibilities: Rahul takes her anal cherry, In another chapter Rahul can bring home a friend so his wife gets DPed and she has to do ass-to-mouth.