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by lilguy

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
You can do better than this

You've got good imagination and with some work on proper grammar and sentence construction, you can write good stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
LEARN GRAMMAR!

I've read most of your stories, and while the plots are interesting, for Belgium's sake, either get somebody to edit your work, or do grammar checks before submitting them!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
TERRIBLE Grammar, & almost UNreadable story 2.

Are you in Grade School? No, they teach how 2 build sentences in grade school! Some of the time you referred to the Amazon as 'he', confusing me! Please actually READ what you've written B4 you submit it, OK?

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