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Anonymousover 14 years agoTERRIBLE Grammar, & almost UNreadable story 2.
Are you in Grade School? No, they teach how 2 build sentences in grade school! Some of the time you referred to the Amazon as 'he', confusing me! Please actually READ what you've written B4 you submit it, OK?
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoLEARN GRAMMAR!
I've read most of your stories, and while the plots are interesting, for Belgium's sake, either get somebody to edit your work, or do grammar checks before submitting them!
Anonymousabout 17 years agoYou can do better than this
You've got good imagination and with some work on proper grammar and sentence construction, you can write good stories.
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