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Click here"Thanks," she said as we got to the kitchen.
"No problem Sam," I said. "If you need anything, just ask."
"I will. Goodnight."
"Night Sam." I went back to the room and crawled into bed, spooning with Becky and quickly falling into a fitful slumber.
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So should Becky take pity on her family and give Andrew some freedom (and all the challenges that come with it) or should she keep him the way he is now? Big things will be happening soon and the fate of the story hangs in the balance. Send me some feedback, even if it's just to give your opinion, I love hearing from y'all. Thanks for reading. More will come soon.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 7 years agoI love the story so far. I do think that Drew should avoid sex with his future mother in law. Being a friend or shoulder to cry on can sometimes be part of a in law relationship though. And Becky might be willing to share with her sister but it shouldn't be at the risk of a friendship, especially between brothers in arms. Ryan needs to decide what he wants with Becky's sister, if he wants to continue their relationship or not with Drew's involvement being based on that.
HTW2over 7 years agoThe first few stories were really good but now your "romance" has gone way down hill. As a retired AF member I apaud your deployment scenarios. But now you're adding stupid scenarios just for the fuck-factor. Take the story back to a love scenario. Find a scenario he wins over the father in law and help fix his marriage not fuck his future mother in law. I complain of your story direction but still give you major credit to have the courage and imagination to put a story together
rnebularover 7 years agoFirst, love this series. Former Army so I can somewhat relate to the Marines side of things. The few things that are bothering me a bit:
1. The advice Andrew gives Sam sounds wrong for his character. He starts by telling her to try to Jumpstart her husband, which sounds good, but then offers to help her if he doesn't respond? He had always been a very faithful kind of guy so I would doubt that he would suggest that she cheat, even if he doesn't like Jeff that much.
2. Lauren and Ryan. I like that they are dealing with some kind of friction in their relationship, but again Becky sharing her man with her sister fits with how Becky is, but I would hope that Drew keeps to his opinion that he won't while she is still seeing Ryan.
Overall love the series and can't wait for more. Will message you with some suggestions for the story of you want.
Rnebular
Anonymousover 7 years agoGreat story, really liked the plot and Andrew and Becky being happy in love. She knows she has a real man and wants to keep him. I know my wife refuses to share me. Even with her sisters, not matter how urgent. I can make repairs, pick her sisters up, take them shopping, but, that is the extent of my kindness.
Yes, I flirt with her sisters and they openly flirt with me. That is the extent of any playing.
I hope you write a little more about Becky and Andrew. Maybe, Jeffrey getting his ass kicked and saved by Andrew. Thank you
