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Darlene stayed with Irma that week - and with her new pretty steady beau - Fred Wilkins, who had just moved into the area. He was an insurance guy and seemed pretty nice.

Cindy was starting to slow down a bit with her own dancing. Well, she was 5 months pregnant now. Think it happened in Europe on that trip.

That was the first of four more kids Cindy and I had. And from that point on seemed like there was always a passel of kids around. Ours and their many friends from school and the whole clogging tribe. Terri finally got Frank to man up and marry her, and she had three kids pretty quickly. Tom and Jean never did get married, or even move in together - but they are still together as a couple. Our grandkids were also around quite a bit, with Krystal being older than our oldest children. And then Kystal's other two siblings, sister Louisa Cindy, and brother Joseph Todd joined us. Tina turned out to be just a great wife and mother. That poison from Irma, her evil witch grandmother, was finally and utterly rejected.

We still dance a little bit - Cindy and I - but we just play and sing a lot more now and bask in the joy of all the youngun's hoofin it while us old folks play and dream of our own glory days. Glory days don't have to be restricted to the young and foolish. And good witches can defeat evil ones - with a hope and a prayer, and maybe just a pinch of forgiveness once or twice.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

A superb two part story, that introduces clogging, demonstrates how real man loves and reveals that some readers are idiots. Please read carefully and enjoy justbobkc's Change and Change-More Change. The characters are like real human beings, warts and all.

To Papermeister4 months ago

"Amazing that the MC would co-sign for Bill" The MC and his original Boss Uncle Bill cosigned for his son-in-law Todd.

The Bad Bill was long gone. Read carefully!!!

To Anonymous5 days ago

"This was chaotic." No it was well laid out!!! Learn to read carefully!!!

THC: Not a Member, from Queensland

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

This was chaotic. The reformation of Tina was somehow stacked and trivial at the same time. "OH daddy!!". So Darlene couldn't budge Darlen one iota and she played the part of Linda Blair in the Exorcist with her father when he first went to see her and Krystal, but they go to a show, Todd implores her to forgive her father, as does Darlene. Huh? That reconciliation was nonsensical.

Meanwhile Cindy, barely married 10 months to the MC, who has brushed off Bill multiple times with his "ethical" swinging crap, has talked to the MC about it and gotten a hard "no", was herself cheated on and got divorced and knows her new husband was viciously betrayed by Darlene of the "two husbands", well why hubby is off climbing rocks and nearly dies, she f$cks Bill behind his back because Billl kept pestering her and clowning around and giving her a joint. And oh yeah all that loud noise and hollering while being f$cked by Bill "of the big penis"? Well that was all fake so she coukd get it over with. And oh yeah her husband nearly died and had a bad head wound and concussion and probably should NOT have driven home. And to top it off, she doesn't bother to try to call him or see him, knowing he was injured.

Usually I am open to a reconciliation for a one time slip where the cheating partner is truly remorseful and penitent. But given the circumstances here in this story? That is a big, nasty ask for the MC. And they won't go to counseling, so who the f$ck knows why she did it and how to prevent it again. The MC was too complacent. And besides woukd you trust Cindy with having your kids? At least for say 5 years? What a mess. In real life, a one time slip of that magnitude and given all the context and circumstances and history, probably means divorce. But hey they talk abiut a new music band, and all is well. Balderdash.

PapermeisterPapermeister5 months ago

Amazing that the MC would co-sign for Bill

Otherwise an enjoyable yarn.

woodwardwoodward5 months ago

Very well done. Thanks! 5

miket0422miket04226 months ago

Entertaining story.

Cindy giving into Bill just to get him to leave their house? One of the weakest and worst excuses for cheating I've heard. How do you save a marriage from that kind of moral weakness and stupidity?

While it was nice that Tina finally got her head out of her ass and the family lived happily ever after it really seemed like she changed her mind and apologized really quickly considering how long and how vehemently she had hated her Dad.

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