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Click hereI reached down to her pussy, which was seeping juice as my cock appeared and disappeared in her tight little snatch and lubricated the middle finger of my right hand, while my left hand rested on her waist and encouraged her movement. I lifted my finger to her sweet little asshole, and started to rub and massage the juice into it. She trembled a little but never stopped the back and forth fucking of her ass. A lower note was heard in her groaning and grunting as I continued to pull her pussy juice up to lubricate her, then slid my finger in to the first knuckle.
"AAHAHHHHH, mmnnnnnn, gghhhhnnnnnn" pretty much described her feelings, so I drove the finger in as deep as I could. She shrieked again, but that wonderful fucking motion of her ass never slowed. Soon I had my index finger buried also, and she was fucking her pussy back onto my cunt and her asshole onto my fingers. As she picked up speed, I could feel them both tighten and I knew that she was cumming again. This time, there was no stopping me as I leaned forward and started to cum. She was still trying to fuck herself back on me, and I was slamming into her so hard I slid her a little forward.
It actually hurt I came so hard. She was begging me to cum in her, and when I started she groaned with each spurt of hot cream. I must have fired six or seven strings of cum into her, as she was mumbling about how fine each one felt. Maybe she was able to tell when I came, after all. I had knocked her to the floor, and was lying on that wonderful sweet ass, my cock still sunk in her. Her legs were spread, and she was lying on her stomach with her hands stretched around behind me holding my ass to keep me as deep as possible inside her. She was crying lightly, and I understood that it was a good cry as she was so well fucked.
I was exhausted. I was an old man compared to this young thing, and had managed to fuck her so well she had come to tears. Of course, I think it helped that she didn't have a lot experience fucking. I raised my head from her sweaty neck, and kissed her weakly on the side of her damp face.
- COMMENTS
PapaGolf414about 2 years agoThis is the Best Ever Literotica story of a kind mature man fucking one of his daughter's young friends. I Give It a 10+ and it deserves it. The story is beautifully told, artistically descriptive, and complete. After getting a nice blow job from another of his daughter's girlfriends in an earlier tory. Daddy Ed gives little Aimee the full shot. He buys her exquisite clothes to wear through their mating, and does he most properly with a great eating out of her little pussy. Only then does he allow her to go down on his big cock, and is careful to let her find a way to get all of his big cock down into her mouth and throat. Just wonderful. And then he manages to work his big cock, bibt by bit, into her tight little pussy a he climaxes again and again. and then he gets her don on her hands and knees and fucks her from behind, while finger-fucking her tight little asshole. Marvelous! I know there is a continuing Chapter to read, and I can't imagine what else Ed will be able to do with his daughter's other friends, but I do hope he has the chance to put all of his talents into doing his little daughter Anne as well! Thanx for the great all-time Read!
Anonymousover 3 years ago...Anonymous 05/17/06 (titled: Impossible).
First, the grammatical problems.
I did not notice them (and I have 8 years education past high school).
If I heard someone say, "I drug it through the mud," it is such a common shirt sleeve English (to borrow a Paul Harveyism) "mistake" that it would probably sound more normal than "dragged."
While I agree with Anonymous that there is an inordinate amount of badly written material on Literotica, this particular story is WELL within what is acceptable for writers on an amateur site.
Next, disrespect.
As I was reading, the idea that he disrespected his young friend
(or women in general) did not even occur to me. The term "horny little cutie" that Anonymous cites as an example of this disrespect, I actually took as admiration -- and as part of the wonder that he was privileged to have a cutie who was little and horny for him.
My view is that by Literotica standards, this story:
has a good plot/storyline
shows storytelling ability
has good use of language.
[See my previous comment for this story's problems.]
Paul in Oklahoma
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoBut I'll just add that your security camera system capabilities were pure BS. Signed: BTW
Anonymousover 4 years agoAlthough I picked this story because it is a favorite topic of mine (older guy with young friend of daughter),
and although I also like the Asian aspect,
and although it is quite well written (the editing errors mentioned in comments did not bother me),
I had a hard time enjoying this tale, especially the latter half.
It is so wordy that it drags out the story, taking so long to move the story forward, that it became tedious.
For example, mentioning the security cameras and how their capabilities would contribute to his later enjoyment, would be fine. But as elaboration continued, I began skipping/scanning. Then when it was brought up again in later paragraphs...what the???? More skipping, slightly annoyed.
Aside from the cameras, it took so long to get the next action completed (eg. head of cock to even begin to enter her pussy lips) that I'm jumping forward through the mass of words to try to find where the next action starts.
So I down-rated it to 4 stars.
I suppose I'll try reading (scanning).the next chapter.
Paul in Oklahoma
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoWhere he got dressed again when he was done making her cum.
ramonbrookover 11 years agoYes there were some issues with the story however I was not affected by it. However I did NOT like the ending. I know she is a lot younger than he is, but she likes older men! Does she like them enough to continue to have a relationship with him? What about the recordings? What about how his daughter feels, when she finds out? What about Ellen when she finds out, will she want some? Or will he be so infatuated with Aimie that he will want to be exclusive? There is a lot more room for future stories
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoI did enjoy this story but echo comments about proofing. Not only are there cases of incorrect word usage - there vs their - but Aimie is talking about George and switches and starts calling him Will, which is Anne's boyfriend. Spell check can't catch these type of mistakes but if you don't catch them, they can/will distract your readers and detract from the story.
roxygrrlabout 12 years agoYes I agree your story needed more proof reading but I was able to get past the mistakes because of how easily I could relate to the story. I've had a thing for older men since for as long as I can remember. Keep up the good work and don't stop writing! Thank you :)
