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Click hereShe got to her feet as quickly as she was able to and nodded, "Yeah... okay." Her mind was scrambled and she was having a difficult time thinking, but the urgency of the situation wasn't lost on her. She gathered her torn clothing and rushed for the door. She opened it quickly, then stopped and turned back to her brother, "Jake... I know we don't have time, but... we'll talk about this... okay?"
Jake, who was only then beginning to feel the true weight of what had happened between them, nodded once, "Yeah."
Hesitantly, Kit returned to him and kissed him quickly, "I love you."
He smiled nervously, "I love you too," he replied as he watched her slip out his bedroom door.
Surely it doesn't end here man it had a great set-up for part 2, although it has been a long time since the story was posted I hope you will consider a part 2 someday.
For anyone wondering, this story was written as a commission, and anything seemingly useless was added per instructions :).
Yep, great story but I don't understand the need for the herbal powder as part of the storyline unless it is going to be part of another chapter that clarifies it's use in the story. I couldn't understand it as part of the story as it wasn't the catalyst for Jake and Kit's awakening to their love for each other. The catalyst was their argument when Kit tried to apologise to Jake that would have stood without the powder being taken by them.
Just felt that the herbal powder was unnecessary to the story as the story stood really well without it. But still a 5-star story....
Good fantasy story, worth keeping on with it. How you explain the body mods to the parents is up to you (code for I have no idea)