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Click hereWe loaned the cars to the National Motor Museum, except for my great-grandfather's Bentley; we gave that to Uncle Richard, as it's his grandfather's car, and he is the oldest son of my grandfather, it felt right that he should have it; I think father would have liked that it went to his big brother and boyhood best friend. My father's and Charlie's motorcycles stayed with us, though; there are some things I will never let go of.
Maybe the kids will do something about that ugly place in the fullness of time; I won't. English Heritage and The National Trust have both hinted that, as the place has no architectural, historic or aesthetic significance, public funds really wouldn't stretch to buying up and shoring up that hideous relic, and as the number of potential buyers could be counted on the fingers of one foot, they'd look the other way if we 'accidently' demolished that hideous eyesore, hmmm...
In the meantime, neither Lori or I have any urge to build another monument to bad taste like that place; our egos will never be that bloated, and with Lori's good, straight-shooting Iowa morality and common-sense to guide them, I don't think our kids will either.
Richard and Hugo did attempt to cook up a "Business Trip" to Des Moines, and they asked Lori for the numbers of some of her friends; at first she was outraged; she wasn't pimping-out her school friends for those two, family or not, and she let them know it in no uncertain terms; Richard and Hugo were silently awestruck as Mount Lori erupted, but after she'd calmed down, they apologised and asked her properly to introduce them to some nice girls of her acquaintance, as they wanted to meet real girls, with real values, just like her, etc, etc. I learned a lesson that day in the fine and delicate art of buttering-up from two masters of the art, remind me to shake their hands, once they wash all the grease off...
As it happens, two of Lori's friends from Des Moines, girls I'd known since they were out of diapers were Lori's bridesmaids, Sara and Josie, and Richard and Hugo's jaws hit the floor with a resounding 'clang!' when they saw those girls. They may not have looked like Lori, but they came from the same kind of background, they'd known Lori and me all their lives, they had the same accent, attitudes and outlook as my Lori, and my two playboy cousins fell like a piano down a mountainside.
Aunt Sophie is of course busily gleefully planning the weddings. Good old Richard and Hugo; at last, two pairs of green eyes tempted them head-first into the noose their mother's been dangling in front of them for years, but you know what? I don't think they care...
My life with Lori is loving and rewarding, and we have immense fun as a family, so perhaps keeping it in the family really was my best move, ever!
(Jack Cameron and Andrew Edgeworth and their wives appear in 'Shining Girl', and Harry Waterfield and his sister-wife, Sai Fong appear in 'All I Ever Wanted')
- COMMENTS
ScottishTexanover 1 year agoThis absolutely needs a trigger warning in the preface for each and every chapter.
WARNING: Excessive amounts of anal intercourse and anal play.
The author obviously has an obsession with butt stuff that even exceeds the definition of a fetishist. 1/5
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoThat whole story is crazy for me on a personal level, I know, worked and have lived in many of the places within the story from Greenham Common, thru to Maine and my first ever job interview in the US was at the Natick Mall(although if I was advising tourists of places to shop around Boston it wouldn't be on my list!). Thank you for such a wonderful story.
Frankie1952almost 4 years agoWow BB, first time I have read this story and I have to say you have done it again. BB your talent amazes me. The way you craft your materpieces is absolutely entertaining to me and often has me emotional as well. More than once in this tale you made my eyes leak. Thank you so much and may your future be wonderful.
SAV12over 5 years agoWELL, I SEE THE STORY FINALLY EMERGED. LESS SEX, MORE ROMANCE, AND SOME DRAMA MADE THIS STORY A LOT BETTER READ. VERY GOOD FINISH TO A STORY THAT STARTED OFF AS A FUCK FEST.
goducks1over 6 years agoAs you know, i really enjoyed this story. not to put pressure on you,.... BUT - When do you think Chapter 6 part 2 will be completed? i'd rather hold off reading part 1 and read them sequentially. i don't care many times, but you tell such a great story, it makes more sense for me.
THANKS!!!
goducks1over 6 years agothis was one of the BEST stories i've read on Literotica. fun, witty, very sexy and erotic. GREAT STORY TELLING. it's very well written and thought-out, and how can you not love the characters. fantastic. i hope you keep writing - because i'll keep reading!!
THANKS!!!
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoLori & David, the perfect love story. Didn't want it to end. Kudos to the very creative author.
Tedybare2007almost 7 years agoI love your stories keep writing them.
I would like you to keep going with these two.
All your stories are AWESOME.
Anonymousover 7 years agoI would love you to write more to this story.Yes about the wedding and maybe a few more ghostly encounters.A little about Lori's friends and Hugo and Richard,also a little more about Rosie and Jimmy.Mostly though I would like to hear more about the detestable Bella and Maude.Maybe have them try something else and get caught. Then have David and Lori stop them in their tracks so badly they will never try again.I have also wondered if you were trying to plant in the minds of your readers that maybe David and Lori's mom was related to Aunt Sophie somehow since they were so similar in looks and attitude.Anyway even if you don't continue the story I loved it.Keep up the good work and ignore the flames.If they think they are so great let them try and write their own story.......R.A. Smith.
beachbum1958over 7 years agoAuthorI've had a a bunch of people messaging me who seem to think too much story is crammed into too brief an epilogue, and I'm starting to think that perhaps they're right.
For some reason this story has resonated with a lot of people, and not a few of those who've messaged me feel I should have made this last chapter a lot longer, as they wanted to hear from Lori about her wedding preparations, as well as the big day, how and why Richard and Hugo fell for her two friends, a little more about James and Rosie and baby Gemma, and maybe a few more ghostly encounters in the grounds of Denham Hall.
The eventual fates of Bella and Maude have also cropped-up a couple of times, but mostly a little more about Lori's married life with David, and her interactions with Sophie and Uncle Richard, perhaps told from her own unique perspective. PM or email me with suggestions, or whether or not you think it would be a good idea to pick up this story thread and tie it off once and for all.
BB1958
Anonymousover 7 years agoNamely, that your gifts as a writer keep scrummaging with your intent to write erotica, wherefore a frustrated few of us romantic prats keep scrolling through the steamy (streamy, screamy, creamy, dreamy, per ardua ad astra) sex bits to satisfy our pervy need to learn what will happen to these two people you've made us care about whose love so moves us. Well, maybe not <all> of those bits, but a lot of them...
